Good points
- Good and clear lighting
- Good climax at the end
- Good and clever credits used on props
Points of improvement
- Music didn't go properly
- Too many straight cuts
- Some pointless shots
- Couldnt see girl in window at end
- unclear storyline at points
- Timing of fast cuts is unusual
- Bad Title
- Build up girls character
The showcase helped us to really see what we needed to focus on. We have understood our areas of weakness and now know what we need to work on improoving. The class gave us great feedback and we have taken all of their points into consideration. We wish that we could have had the opportunity to showcase the sequences earlier as now there is not that much time to adjust the footage.
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